Monday, May 24, 2010
black rook in rainy weather
Black Rook In Rainy Weather - Sylvia Plath
On the stiff twig up there
Hunches a wet black rook
Arranging and rearranging its feathers in the rain.
I do not expect a miracle
Or an accident
To set the sight on fire
In my eye, nor seek
Any more in the desultory weather some design,
But let spotted leaves fall as they fall,
Without ceremony, or portent.
Although, I admit, I desire,
Occasionally, some backtalk
From the mute sky, I can't honestly complain:
A certain minor light may still
Lean incandescent
Out of kitchen table or chair
As if a celestial burning took
Possession of the most obtuse objects now and then --
Thus hallowing an interval
Otherwise inconsequent
By bestowing largesse, honor,
One might say love. At any rate, I now walk
Wary (for it could happen
Even in this dull, ruinous landscape); skeptical,
Yet politic; ignorant
Of whatever angel may choose to flare
Suddenly at my elbow. I only know that a rook
Ordering its black feathers can so shine
As to seize my senses, haul
My eyelids up, and grant
A brief respite from fear
Of total neutrality. With luck,
Trekking stubborn through this season
Of fatigue, I shall
Patch together a content
Of sorts. Miracles occur,
If you care to call those spasmodic
Tricks of radiance miracles. The wait's begun again,
The long wait for the angel,
For that rare, random descent.
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There's too much language to love in this poem. What bits do you like?
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11 comments:
I'm allergic to Sylvia Plath. She makes me think about killing myself.
Well, ok...
but this poem is about writer's block, and has a positive and beautiful ending...
'The long wait for the angel,' Beautiful...
yeah, I love that.
Sylvia Path--always been afraid of her. I mirror Ms Moon's feelings. Makes me feel like being ...to "quoth the raven, Nevermore."
See, I embraced all that, in my goth adolescence.
I thought "oh no poetry," scrolled to the end to see if there was a particular point and then was told it was "too much language." So I might not bother.
(Can you tell I have an English degree? I am SO intellectual.)
Poor, Mwa, Poor!
Too much language to LOVE. As in, I can't pick a favourite bit because there's too much brilliance. Not sisters on his one!!
fave:
A certain minor light may still
Lean incandescent
Out of kitchen table or chair
As if a celestial burning took
Possession of the most obtuse objects now and then --
Thus hallowing an interval
Otherwise inconsequent...
Plath is bewitching and addicting. Like eating potato chips. can't stop.
geeks in rome sent me back to re-read. I like it better now. But I still like my language clear and easy to read. I'm shallow like that. My dad says I will come to like poetry with age. So far, I like the ones who can say it with fewer words, and use sharp images. I try, though - sometimes.
WEll, points for trying Mwa.
Geeks, kudos for trying to expand Mwa's mind - I thought she'd relate to this one, acutally.
I love 'a rook can so shine as so seize my senses, haul my eyelids up and grant respite from this season of fatigue'
'so shine, as to seize my senses' is just ... ahhh, beautiful.
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