Monday, May 24, 2010

black rook in rainy weather



 Black Rook In Rainy Weather - Sylvia Plath



On the stiff twig up there

Hunches a wet black rook

Arranging and rearranging its feathers in the rain.

I do not expect a miracle

Or an accident



To set the sight on fire

In my eye, nor seek

Any more in the desultory weather some design,

But let spotted leaves fall as they fall,

Without ceremony, or portent.



Although, I admit, I desire,

Occasionally, some backtalk

From the mute sky, I can't honestly complain:

A certain minor light may still

Lean incandescent



Out of kitchen table or chair

As if a celestial burning took

Possession of the most obtuse objects now and then --

Thus hallowing an interval

Otherwise inconsequent



By bestowing largesse, honor,

One might say love. At any rate, I now walk

Wary (for it could happen

Even in this dull, ruinous landscape); skeptical,

Yet politic; ignorant



Of whatever angel may choose to flare

Suddenly at my elbow. I only know that a rook

Ordering its black feathers can so shine

As to seize my senses, haul

My eyelids up, and grant



A brief respite from fear

Of total neutrality. With luck,

Trekking stubborn through this season

Of fatigue, I shall

Patch together a content



Of sorts. Miracles occur,

If you care to call those spasmodic

Tricks of radiance miracles. The wait's begun again,

The long wait for the angel,

For that rare, random descent.

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There's too much language to love in this poem. What bits do you like?

11 comments:

Ms. Moon said...

I'm allergic to Sylvia Plath. She makes me think about killing myself.

Jo said...

Well, ok...

but this poem is about writer's block, and has a positive and beautiful ending...

SaS said...

'The long wait for the angel,' Beautiful...

Jo said...

yeah, I love that.

Unknown said...

Sylvia Path--always been afraid of her. I mirror Ms Moon's feelings. Makes me feel like being ...to "quoth the raven, Nevermore."

Jo said...

See, I embraced all that, in my goth adolescence.

Mwa said...

I thought "oh no poetry," scrolled to the end to see if there was a particular point and then was told it was "too much language." So I might not bother.

(Can you tell I have an English degree? I am SO intellectual.)

Jo said...

Poor, Mwa, Poor!

Too much language to LOVE. As in, I can't pick a favourite bit because there's too much brilliance. Not sisters on his one!!

geeks in rome said...

fave:
A certain minor light may still
Lean incandescent
Out of kitchen table or chair
As if a celestial burning took
Possession of the most obtuse objects now and then --
Thus hallowing an interval
Otherwise inconsequent...


Plath is bewitching and addicting. Like eating potato chips. can't stop.

Mwa said...

geeks in rome sent me back to re-read. I like it better now. But I still like my language clear and easy to read. I'm shallow like that. My dad says I will come to like poetry with age. So far, I like the ones who can say it with fewer words, and use sharp images. I try, though - sometimes.

Jo said...

WEll, points for trying Mwa.

Geeks, kudos for trying to expand Mwa's mind - I thought she'd relate to this one, acutally.

I love 'a rook can so shine as so seize my senses, haul my eyelids up and grant respite from this season of fatigue'

'so shine, as to seize my senses' is just ... ahhh, beautiful.